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Creative Writing Do you write poetry, short stories? This is the forum to post any kind of creative writings that you would like to share with us.

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Old 01-18-2012, 06:34 AM   #1
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Behind your shadow I hide

Ignore me, I donít mind

In silence I should shout

Whisper your name aloud



In darkness Iím youíre light

Close your eyes, thatís fine

Youíve already been blinded

By a false bright star



**Hey, Iím here canít you see

Iíve been reaching for you,

Trying to catch you

Hey, Iím here canít you feel

My heartís beating for you

Iím now living for you.



Dry your tears, donít weep

Iíll lull you till you sleep

Iíll sing my song for you

And whisper, ďI love youĒ



*Still left unnoticed


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Very sad, but nice. Thank you for sharing.
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Very sad, but nice. Thank you for sharing.



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