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Creative Writing Do you write poetry, short stories? This is the forum to post any kind of creative writings that you would like to share with us.

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Old 12-15-2008, 09:19 PM   #1
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I wrote this when my girlfriend and I were going through our problems. This is how I felt about our relationship at this point.
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Silence Pumps Our Hearts

it's like when I covet the azure eyes of frothing dogs
and you say they only get rabies
when there's nothing left to love.
Euthanasia would have been a saner
choice than a Kamikaze shot
and a dune of clothing
rippled across your white carpet.
Maybe I'm a barrel of lunatics
on two spindly legs,

or you've never licked the rain from your teeth.
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Old 12-16-2008, 01:20 AM   #2
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Another nice 1, makes you think...thanks again for sharing with us hun.
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Old 12-16-2008, 01:35 AM   #3
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interesting...
very creative. good job at expressing. thanks for sharing...
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Your welcome, keep the poems coming, I do enjoy reading poetry.
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