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Creative Writing Do you write poetry, short stories? This is the forum to post any kind of creative writings that you would like to share with us.

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Old 09-20-2008, 04:22 PM   #1
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The hand you hold, does it feel like mine?
Is it strong and gentle, safe and kind?
The lips you kiss, do they taste like me?
Are they soft and meaningful, intent but free?
When you hear his voice does your heart skip beats?
Do his loving words make you feel complete?
Do you wear my shirt and close your eyes?
Imagine my hands around your thighs?
When you make love to him does the experience compare?
Do you smell my cologne in the summer air?
The eyes you gaze into, are they tepid and blue?
Do they silently say 'I love you'?
The chest you feel, is it powerful and wide?
When it envelopes your body, does your breathing subside?
The arms that surround you, do they protect you from harm?
Do they catch you when you fall, do they make you feel warm?
The face you caress, is it honest and sincere?
Does it trust you implicitly, does it remove your fear?
On the nights you are lonely, scared and alone,
Do you still dream of us, sleeping in our home?
When you hear The Ataris is the experience surreal?
Do the lyrics resonate and test your will?
When you watch The Notebook do the tears still fall?
Crystal my love, do you even think of me at all?
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Old 09-20-2008, 04:25 PM   #2
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Very nice & sad too Tragedy! Those are some very powerful questions you have there. Alot of them I'm sure many people that are/have gone through what you are have asked themselves too.

Thank you for posting that, looking forward to seeing more of your poetry.
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Old 09-20-2008, 05:31 PM   #3
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These are very talented poems tragedy..thank you for sharing them with us.
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