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Creative Writing Do you write poetry, short stories? This is the forum to post any kind of creative writings that you would like to share with us.

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Old 01-07-2008, 05:36 PM   #1
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You came into my life and you made me realize just what true love is.

Then you leave me stranded without ever letting me tell you just how much you mean to me.

All this time I have been searching for you, and I have yet to love another as much as I love you.

When I have just about given up on finding you and fulfilling the love that is still aching in my heart for you…

You appear out of a cloud like an angel, and you give me back the love that I thought was gone forever.

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(This is the first poem I ever wrote. It's been around for a long time, I even have it published in a book of poetry. I took a chance a while ago, sent it in for a poetry contest & it wound up in a book.)
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Old 01-07-2008, 10:20 PM   #2
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Hey congratulations on having it published, it's beautiful! I stopped writing, and even when I did I never got the courage to even let other people read my work lol, seriously that's awesome though!
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Old 01-07-2008, 11:29 PM   #3
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That was really nice Sapphire..I am proud of you for having it published as well
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well done Sapphire you have got the touch there mate
very nice
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Thanks everyone!

Avluve, I never wanted to show my poetry either hun. I had a good friend a few years back that encouraged me to send in that poem to a poetry contest. So I took the chance & it did well.

I have more poems, but I have to find them. I haven't written anything is so long that the books are packed away.
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I liked that a lot, Sapphire. That's awesome it was published!
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It is beautiful Sapphire! you are the Angel? i'm not good at understanding poetry but thats what i think when i read it. maybe thats just because you have been My Angel! Congratulations on publishing!
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Thank you Daisy hun! No, I was talking about the person that came back to my life was the angel.
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