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Ominous Cerulean
09-14-2008, 08:13 AM
I'm new here but I'm so happy to see a place for poetry and with that said let me share mine.

As I lay down I see nothing but you....

I remember those days and remembered I didn't have a clue....

The love you had for me was so real...

Whenver I held you, I regret I just couldn't feel...

How true it was and how you truly loved....

I see it now, but to bad for me...

All I can do is want with these eyes so lonely

**Sapphire**
09-14-2008, 02:46 PM
Very good poem Cerulean, thank you much for sharing this with us. If you have more great poem, don't be shy, share them with us. I love to read poetry & short stories.

aussiecoffee007
09-14-2008, 09:08 PM
i really like that poem, it kind of captures, at least for me, the pain of love and knowing you cant really love someone who loves you and you realize later what you should have done.

Ominous Cerulean
11-08-2008, 04:57 AM
Another one I wrote a lil' while ago. Just thought I'd post it here.

Here we are once again...

Standing here together only now as friends...

Dying embers in both ours eyes...

The igniting wind passing ever so sweetly bye...

2 Hearts beating simultaneously...

But the sound fading ever so feebly...

**Sapphire**
11-08-2008, 11:01 PM
Another nice poem Cerulean, thanks for sharing with us. :)